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Overall, well done

The artwork was above-par, and I'm thankful I didn't see any sprites.

My only real criticism is that the move is entitiled "Byakugan VS Sharingan," as such, you should focus on those two aspects. The only time either one was used (Byakugan) was when Neji did his 64-palm strike, and even that was sub-par. Next time, I suggest you devise a thorough understanding of how to manipulate both aspects of the parties abilities.

As an earlier review said, it wouldn't be such a bad idea to enable a user-choose-victor option.

On a more personal option, I like Neji more, but I feel Sasuke has more potential.

Decent

The graphic style is somewhat reminiscent of Broken Saints, but not quite there. You have an interesting style to how you go about creating it, and the choreography is top-notch. My only suggestions is that you do a little research. Most of what you did in the movie looks freestyle, and when put into slow motion, that decreases the quality of the fight (s). My suggestions are as follows:
-Study (if only briefly) styles such as Bojutsu (Bo Staff) and Eishin-Ryu Iaido (Unsheathing the sword, attacking, and then re-sheathing the sword). They will give you a better feel of technique and originality.

- If you do not know any forms of martial arts, don't worry. Computers nowadays can more than compensate for lack of experience. When you are trying to get dramatic in a scene, increase the speed of it. This will not only improve the volume of excitement, but make the actors look as if thier fighting in real-time.

-Avoid cliche moves such as when the sword sweeping across the top of the males head. It looks cool, sure, but lacks definition and originality. If you absolutely must use such said techniques, the add a little " jazz," to it. For instance, slow time 6X from real-time and show the after-image of the sword and the guy, the right as the sword misses his head, speed up the action to about 6X normal time.

You definitely have alot of potential as an artist. If you wish to learn more about any of the above martial art styles, or simply want more feedback from me, then e-mail me (listed in my profile).

Good Luck.

Gemini_Bloodian

Suggestion

Overall, I think you were somewhat original in making this. Obviously, you copied the border, but you vastly changed some of the styling of the flash, not to mention the choice of song. Seeing as how these came out at just about the right time, credit must be given to you.

About time.

Finally, my favorite hentai flash maker(s) create a Sex Kitten-RPG.

Your other Sex Kitten flashes were great, but short. My only expectation that this be longer.